Wednesday 25 February 2015

Essay Feedback

Re-write introduction and conclusion with clear direction.

  • Harvard reference everything
  • Clear direction/aim of essay
  • Definition of lad culture
  • Why this is not a recent phenomenon- since 90s?
  • This is just another way of patriarchy making it okay to degrade women/feminine attributes. 
  • Bring down the word count edit everything 
Once done email to Richard!