Formative Feedback – Richard Miles COP3

·      6000 words drafted so far.

·      Go through first chapter and select and find the key points/terminology.

Intro

·      500 words

·      Map out argument i.e. chapter structure

·      Methodology (approach each chapters key texts, theoretical approach and my reasons behind selecting the examples of art that I did.)

·      Your aims for the chapters.

Chapter 1

·      Needs Harvard referencing.

·      Needs triangulation – use historical reference to make quick reference to counter arguments. For example, “writer X in ‘book X’ (1893), writer Y in ‘book 2’ (1800) and, most importantly, writer A in ‘book A’ (2002), have all made this argument.

·      Highlight key points.

·      Reiterate key points in the conclusion to link to conclusion.

·      Sum up the chapter and explain what you will look into in chapter 2 in regards to what you have found out in chapter 1.

Chapter 2

·      Refer back to key terminology/ideas from chapter 1.

·      Remove unnecessary contextual narrative.

·      6 artworks.

·      Sum up the key parts of the chapter and what you have found out. Then explain your aims for the next chapter in regards to what you have found out in chapter 2.

Chapter 3

·      Refer back to key terminology/ideas from chapter 1.

·      6 artworks.

·      Remove any unnecessary contextual narrative.

Conclusion

·      Three paragraphs- Chapter 1 key points, Chapter 2 key points, Chapter 3 key points.

·      Then rest of 1000 words can be like the draft conclusion but more structured and concise, but you can ask questions, explore the themes etc.

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